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Title: raven_crpesley


raven_crepsley - June 2, 2008 10:22 PM (GMT)
Full Name: Jamison Raven Crooper (is called Jame)
Blood Type: Pure
Year: 3
Age: 13 (birthday August 5)
Prefered Hogwarts House: Slytherin

Appearance

Bright red hair and piercing blue eyes. Alway in colorful clothes. She is 4' 11" but always seems taller because she is always sitting straight and never slumps.



Personality
A very fun to be around person but can always find the negative things. Always pretty hyper and all around an awesome person to hang out with.

Melanie Hunter - June 2, 2008 10:29 PM (GMT)
A few things you need to fix:

Your character has no weaknesses. You need one physical weakness (in her appearance) and two personal weaknesses (In her personality). These can be as severe or weak as you want, but they have to be there. You can have more than that amount, too.

Your personality description does not meet the 40 word length requirement.

You need History, Place of Residence, and most importantly you need the hidden code from the rules which you can only find by reading them. It is seven words long.


Also, you did not register your username correctly. I will be changing it to your character's name so it fits the guidelines mentioned in the rules.




~Mel






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