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[b]Full Name: Carmella Rose
[b]Blood Type Pure
[b]Year:1
[b]Age:17
[b]Preferred Hogwarts House:Slytherin

Appearance
Carmella Rose has reddish-blonde hair and green eyes. She is short, only 4 foot 8. Her strengths are her good flying skills and quickness to pick up on lessons.

Personality
She is shy when first met, but will eventually warm up to people. She is mostly a loner. She is scared of spiders and does not want to flunk out of the school. She is quiet.





History
She grew up in the US but then moved to London, England where her parents and her currently reside.


[b]Place Of Residence
London, England

[b]What was the secret code from the rules?
You are, in other words, exactly my brand of heroin.

Denied for now.

There are several things wrong with your application

First: You character cannot be 17 and a 1st year.
Second: Your app lacks a physical weakness and your physical description needs some serious revamping.
Third: The personality part is severely lacking description.
Fourth: The secret code is wrong.

This leads me to believe that you didn't read the rules. Please read or reread them so that you know what you need to fix. There are a few things I left out, hopefully a careful reading of the rules will help you find what else is missing.