Title: O'Hare, Anya
Anya O'Hare - July 9, 2008 01:35 PM (GMT)
Character Information
Full Name: Anya O’Hare
Blood Type: Half
Year: 1st
Age: 11 (Birthday is October 4th)
Preferred Hogwarts House: Ravenclaw
Appearance
Anya is a nice little girl from Ireland. She’s 11, standing at 5'3" and weighing 105 puonds. She has long, wavy red hair, light blue eyes and a lot of freckles on her nose and her cheeks. She likes to tie up her hair in a ponytail. She wears jeans and likes very much blue t-shirts.
Personality
Anya is really shy, she likes to stay alone and she hadn’t a lot of friends in the muggle world. When she got a friend she likes to have fun with him or her. Anya likes studying and reading very much, sometimes she writes something in her personal diary. She’s too much protective with his twin, Steven and she’s quite jealous of him. She’s afraid of height and she likes very much to watch the sky. Anya hates people who mistreat other guys just for the taste of doing it.
Melanie Hunter - July 9, 2008 10:16 PM (GMT)
A few things that need to be fixed-
You don't have a weakness in her appearance.
You're missing the History and Place of Residence sections.
~Mel
Anya O'Hare - July 9, 2008 10:23 PM (GMT)
a weakness? you mean a weak point?
and where should I write the history? (which is in common with Steven O'Hare I suppose )
Melanie Hunter - July 9, 2008 10:27 PM (GMT)
No, no, not a weak point. I mean something in her physical appearance that makes her human. Like how some people have big ears or acne...big feet...very short...frizzy hair...anything. Get creative with it. :P :)
Don't put it in her history, put it in her appearance section.
~Mel
Anya O'Hare - July 9, 2008 10:30 PM (GMT)
ok xD for the History I gotta wait Steven
p.s. sorry for my English xD i know it isn't very good, but I'm italian
Melanie Hunter - July 9, 2008 10:53 PM (GMT)
Don't worry about it, I know people who actually speak English as their native language who don't write as well as you do. lol.
PM me whenever you're done with everything. :)
~Mel