Full Name: Aimi Catty Yamari
Blood Type: Pure[COLOR=purple]
Year: 3
Age: 14 (Birthday is December 25)
Prefered Hogwarts House: Ravenclaw


Appearance
Melanie is an average 15-year-old girl, standing at 5'4" and weighing 110 pounds She has Sapphire blue eyes, dark, wavy brown hair, and tan skin. She doesn’t like make-up. She doesn’t worry about her appearance too much, because she wears what she thinks is nice and comfortable, rather than the latest trends. So she's a jeans and t shirt girl. Nothing fancy.

Personality

Aimi’s top priority in life is to have fun, therefore, she loves to laugh, and a smile is almost on her face. She’s very outgoing, a little anti-social, but loves to see people laughing and having fun. Aimi hates to see people upset or disappointed. If she sees someone hurt or upset, she has to help them, even if they’re a stranger. Aimi tends to hold grudges against people, even if it’s over something completely stupid that didn’t concern her, and is not easily annoyed and angered, but she can get quite scary when she’s angry. Aimi is a good listener. If someone needs to talk about something - anything - she’ll listen until they’re done. Many people think she's strange because she constantly talks to imaginary people, but she insists they aren't imaginary. she’s very protective of people she cares about. She’s also loyal, brave, weird, very intelligent, and extremely shy. She stands firmly for what she believes in, and can’t stand injustice. Aimi likes alone time. She likes to listen to music, write in her journal,, and talk to imaginary people. She dislikes show-offs, people who think they’re superior to everyone, and bugs. Some of her interests are reading, singing, dancing, writing, and Quidditch.

I don't even know how to respond to this. I don't even want to on so many levels.

First off- do you think I was born yesterday? This is my application. You didn't even replace the name Melanie from the first sentence. Honestly, everyone else who has applied here has taken the time to make their own profile, you should suck it up and do the same thing. I worked so hard on that, I'm deeply offended that you tried to pass it off as yours.

Second off- it is beyond obvious that you did not read the rules. You did not register correctly, nor did you PM the code.

Thirdly- You're missing two entire fields of the application. History, and Place of residence.


I'm sorry to sound mean, but if you're not even going to take the time to make your own application or read the rules, I have very little respect left for you.


Obviously not approved. Go over and do your application over, make it YOUR OWN this time. I'm changing your name to fit the rules, and it will be the name you supplied in your application. Please make sure that you have the fields I mentioned that you neglected to add.





~Mel